A Leading Paint Brand
A customer asks why the paint on their radiator is bubbling off and you look it up on the system. But the answer is a mess. You can’t use this. You don’t have time to rewrite it. And you definitely don’t have time to look up those complicated jargon words you’re struggling to read at the moment. So you copy and paste and hope for the best. We all know that’s not good enough.
What we did
Set the goals
We worked with the Knowledge Manager to put some realistic targets in place. As she needed to review each piece, we decided on 25 articles a week. She identified some of the questions that came up most frequently and we set a timeline to work through them.
Cut, cut and cut again
The main problem with the existing copy was the length. Many of the articles went into too much detail or repeated points unnecessarily. We ruthlessly cut out anything that wasn’t useful.
Staff needed to quickly scan articles for the right advice. And customers want to receive straightforward answers to their questions. We made the copy easier for everyone to understand.
The original copy was often formal, and full of jargon and irrelevant internal memos. But the team were talking to real customers, so friendly and informative was the new order of the day.
A more appropriate tone
The team are thrilled. They have straightforward answers they can use as they are, or as a starting point for their own writing. Now when a customer asks a tricky question, there’s a friendly, easy-to-understand answer just waiting to be used.